Glad to see another cap. We know you are busy and appreciate anything you are able to produce. Your captions are always well thought out. And you did a great job with all the rhyming in this one. Well done.
My only constructive critique (which is something I've noticed with various artists) is continuity throughout. You have them start as spouses, but they are bf/gf by the second half of the second column. I know relationship statuses can change, but there should be a purpose to the change. Other artists sometimes change the characters name accidentally and I understand it's hard to sometimes remember continuity with longer caps/stories.
I hope you take that as a constructive observation and not a complaint. Again, your captions are amazing and I hope you continue blessing us with your amazing work.
They were never married in my mind. Spouse was just a rhyme. Rhymes are hard to find and not something I do all the time. I just wanted to have some fun and share something with everyone, that didn't require tonnes of thought but here I am, utterly fraught, at why you'd criticise my fun when I wasn't harming anyone. So I say to thee, next time you try to ruin my glee, think is this really something I want to do? I thank you for the nice things you said but I promise there was continuity in my head and with that I bid you adieu.
Selfish lover to ho ho ho, truly the spirit of the season!
ReplyDeleteIt's so goofy but I wanted to make a rhyming caption and I'm really happy with how it came together. 💖💚
DeleteGlad to see another cap. We know you are busy and appreciate anything you are able to produce. Your captions are always well thought out. And you did a great job with all the rhyming in this one. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMy only constructive critique (which is something I've noticed with various artists) is continuity throughout. You have them start as spouses, but they are bf/gf by the second half of the second column. I know relationship statuses can change, but there should be a purpose to the change. Other artists sometimes change the characters name accidentally and I understand it's hard to sometimes remember continuity with longer caps/stories.
I hope you take that as a constructive observation and not a complaint. Again, your captions are amazing and I hope you continue blessing us with your amazing work.
They were never married in my mind. Spouse was just a rhyme. Rhymes are hard to find and not something I do all the time. I just wanted to have some fun and share something with everyone, that didn't require tonnes of thought but here I am, utterly fraught, at why you'd criticise my fun when I wasn't harming anyone. So I say to thee, next time you try to ruin my glee, think is this really something I want to do? I thank you for the nice things you said but I promise there was continuity in my head and with that I bid you adieu.
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